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Imprisoned.

One day I overstepped the boundries
of what my mind could bear,
and found myself imprisoned
in a world neither here nor there.

My need for escape is desperate
though I continue to be gated.
The challenges of each day remind me
that my control has been invaded.

I take some solace in knowing
that freedom surely awaits.
For one day soon I'll awake
and walk back through the gates.

When I get back to the other side
I'll touch reality with a happy hand.
The journey that took me so far away
will bring me back a better man.
 

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Imprisoned.

One day I overstepped the boundries
of what my mind could bear,
and found myself imprisoned
in a world neither here nor there.

My need for escape is desperate
though I continue to be gated.
The challenges of each day remind me
that my control has been invaded.

I take some solace in knowing
that freedom surely awaits.
For one day soon I'll awake
and walk back through the gates.

When I get back to the other side
I'll touch reality with a happy hand.
The journey that took me so far away
will bring me back a better man.
 
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you know why I loved that?
because I cannot make a rhyming poem without it sounding forced and terrible.

and that was neither.

good, good stuff.
 

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That is sooooo cool! I think that discribes us all! Thank you for that... It made me feel a little better!
 
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