[john_henry]

Imprisoned.

One day I overstepped the boundries
of what my mind could bear,
and found myself imprisoned
in a world neither here nor there.

My need for escape is desperate
though I continue to be gated.
The challenges of each day remind me
that my control has been invaded.

I take some solace in knowing
that freedom surely awaits.
For one day soon I'll awake
and walk back through the gates.

When I get back to the other side
I'll touch reality with a happy hand.
The journey that took me so far away
will bring me back a better man.

 

[john_henry]

Imprisoned.

One day I overstepped the boundries
of what my mind could bear,
and found myself imprisoned
in a world neither here nor there.

My need for escape is desperate
though I continue to be gated.
The challenges of each day remind me
that my control has been invaded.

I take some solace in knowing
that freedom surely awaits.
For one day soon I'll awake
and walk back through the gates.

When I get back to the other side
I'll touch reality with a happy hand.
The journey that took me so far away
will bring me back a better man.

 

[Guest]

that was a good poem. i liked it a lot..

 

[john_henry]

hey thank you very much.

 

[Universal]

very nice ::clap clap:: that actually rhymes

 

[rainboteers]

Beautiful.

 

[Guest]

you know why I loved that?
because I cannot make a rhyming poem without it sounding forced and terrible.

and that was neither.

good, good stuff.

 

[Guest]

Beautiful Poem

 

[MrMortgage]

That is sooooo cool! I think that discribes us all! Thank you for that... It made me feel a little better!